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A by Vertigo

If only I could reflect as well as I can dream...living in its seams where I am am invincible in a mortal body, trapped within the contours of my skin that reach out like lightning and though I am fair I don't burn quite so easily so that I can stand closer to the sun beams and breathe its warmth...I live in countless memories that color autumn in golden light and make constellations come alive and allows sunsets to fall into twilight.

© 2009 Vertigo


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I really like this, especially from "I live in countless memories..."
It seems to be missing a last line? like there was something that wasn't said or stated, and for that it seems to be lacking direction, or maybe it would benefit from a different layout.. but brilliant words all the same. I enjoyed reading it, it was so vivid in my mind, good write =]

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Added on July 31, 2009

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Vertigo
Vertigo

Lithia Springs, GA



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My work...does have personal meaning, however in poetry it's about how it makes you feel or how it speaks to you... -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------.. more..

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