The color that continues to fade

Nothing is ever the same and nothing is ever worth doing when you have to do it alone...

Bravery is fickle to the sunlight
Brazing irises in the soundless waves
And our gazes are apart in passing
Like our shadows meeting under the same edging day
Where we live to breathe
And fade further away
Oh these lonely followings as I sit at the steps
And gaze
Underneath the solemn quake
And my life that continues to take and take and take
In the color that continues to fade...

Reviews

[Globy]

And my life that continues to take and take and take
In the color that continues to fade...

SO GREAT!!!!!

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Beyond beautiful...You create images...that are so...clear...more clear than one would expect...You put together beautiful words...and turn them into something...amazing....phenomenal write

[Steve]

Well done! I like the nice descriptions.....

[Jeff]

That is really good.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Lat two lines..breathtaking..
Well written..