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The suns haven't changed the morning doves that swim
As I am more awake...than alive
And the shoulder breaks through the oncoming storm
Breathing these shadows for eyes

Reviews

[A.A.Romanczuk]

It's so short but it strikes one...As I am more awake...than alive
Awesome line....because generally awakeness signifies being alive but
I see where You're going with this...I really like this piece :)