Soul

Sort of came to mind really, i did abit of ryhming for fun of course, this was'nt planned at all -.-

I was once blind, forever unseen.

hiding in the dark, gentle as a stream.

Moving like the wind, Fast and free.

i stand taller than an old Oak tree.

 

Flames burning throughout my soul.

Feeding the fire, with precious coal.

Earth detached from the heavenly divine.

The brightly lit tunnel, shining its sign.

 

My time is up, i must go.

My soul is free, forever alone.

Reviews

[Amata Luna]

Now that's what you call "humanity". The first lines of your stanza looks good and nice. More than that the whole flow of the poem glides easily in one's tongue so its a fun piece to read. Good job.