Extreme

 

Climb into my mind

 

e   x   p    l     o     d      e

 

be my angel, be my demon, saviour, holy maiden

 

k      i       l       l                      M      E

 

Magical Extraterrestrial

 

this is a song of an enlightened deity

Reviews

[Stephanie]

Woah.... I just love it when I get to read something different like this. It was amazing, gives me lots to think about and I admire the form. There's been a lot of new ideas floating around on the Cafe lately and this is one of them. Really awesome poem, great job! :]

[theludus]

You're not too shabby yourself, it's pretty tight and fairly hums along. nice work.

[deeps]

This is wonderful,
I liked this one alot.

[John McGrael]

this is art....

this is more than poetry, more than simply words....

i really like it

[Bud]

I'm at a loss for words on this...WOW! This has such a great depth to it. It's made me start thinking...BRAVO!
An Excellent write! Keep up the Magnificent works of art!