Forever

Forever

A Poem by Layni LaCroix
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A short poem based on a conversation I had. If you wish me to name you, all you have to do is ask!

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I didn’t mean for things to turn out this way

It was simple

But I suppose not

I won’t ask for forgiveness anymore

Because I only hurt you

So if you must leave me behind

To take care of your memories

You don’t even have to ask

I’ll be right here

Waiting

Forever

© 2013 Layni LaCroix


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"To take care of your memories

You don’t even have to ask

I’ll be right here

Waiting

Forever"

A very nice poem. I like the ending the most...:)



Posted 11 Years Ago


You don’t even have to ask

I’ll be right here

Waiting

Forever.......... These lines make me come in touch with a song,"I'll be right here waiting for ya' ". But anyway, it's a craft.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 6, 2013
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Layni LaCroix
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Hello everyone. I'm a young aspiring author and poet (Though I often hear I'm unsuccessful in poetry, I'd like to do my best) who also plans on training for voice acting soon. When I am an adult I pla.. more..

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