What About Living Life

What About Living Life

A Poem by Lawryie Mh-Lk

Too many thoughts in a single mind,
Too much stuff occupying the space.
Waiting for too many things at a time,
And comes pressure to be drowning under.


What about living life, simply like that?
Appreciating all the things around,
Releasing the anxiety of realisations,
Because we make it too much to handle.


One thing at a time is a good way,
Ordering too much makes us lose it.
Obsession with desires ruins life experience
Because we finally end up with nothing.


What about living life, just like that?
Keeping our good dreams somewhere,
Keeping on moving forward and maybe,
Things may happen when not expected.

© 2022 Lawryie Mh-Lk


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"One thing at a time is a good way" is a very wise statement. It is the essence of Zen Buddhism.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Lawryie Mh-Lk

2 Years Ago

I never knew that, thank you for letting me know.
I came to the point where I've noticed that.. read more

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Added on April 29, 2022
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Lawryie Mh-Lk
Lawryie Mh-Lk

Lome, Maritime, Togo



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Just someone who loves words, poetry and storyies. I write poems for the pleasure and I am an instrumental composer also. more..

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