Holiday Horror

A two sentence horror story.

To each and all and every one
he raised his hat and then his gun,
boom and boom and boom again,
but to the last a wink and grin.

'Now no more naughty with their flaws,’
so said a jolly Santa Claus.

Author's Note

Did it effectively convey horror in two sentences? How could it be better?

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

It was like the opening scene to that Bill Murray movie 'Scrooged' - I ddn't get horror - I did get a laugh though at the thought of the trigger happy Saint Nick.

[LawrenceRaybon]

I hadn't even thought of that! I love that movie. Though it did scare the crap out of me as a kid. The people under Future's robe freaked me out.

Thanks for the review, and I'll try to put more horror in my next two sentence horror challenge!