I Pick You!

I Pick You!

A Poem by LawrenceRaybon
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A poem about love found...

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“I pick you!

Oh goddess divine,

Only let me drink in your beauty

And I am forever yours!

There never was

Nor shall ever be

Another one such as you!

Perfection…”

He sees another woman,

“I pick you!” 

© 2016 LawrenceRaybon


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How fickle some men eh, only the best thing since sliced bread until the next loaf opened. New many a man like this in my younger days

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

Yeah, I know people like this now. Only sometimes they seem to get married before they see the next.. read more

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LawrenceRaybon

Jackson, MS



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