My Enemy
A Story by
LawrenceRaybon
A ten word story
I raise my sword to strike down my enemy, myself.
© 2015 LawrenceRaybon
Author's Note
One of three ten word stories I wrote to try to get back into writing.
Reviews
This one is brilliant. We need to fight our own war.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Welcome back :)
I misread this as "I raise my sword to strike down my fallen self."
My misreading turned it into a pun :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
Welcome back :)
I misread this as "I raise my sword to strike down my fallen self."
My misreading turned it into a pun :)
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Added on May 30, 2015
Last Updated on May 30, 2015
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LawrenceRaybon Jackson, MS
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I'm an avid reader who loves to write. I also love helping others who are serious about improving their writing! My critiques are in-depth and honest, no ego stroking and I expect the same wh..
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