Kilaree Cheddar

A series of Senryu that tell a story

Sharp, White, Delicious

With crackers or on its own

Kilaree Cheddar

Bold, Smooth and Tasty

A gift from Ireland's cows

Kilaree Cheddar

Stolen by my wife

While I sit here writing these

Kilaree Cheddar

Kilaree Cheddar

When will I see you again

Such lonely crackers

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Marie]

I would certainly love some of this cheese. I never get good cheese...

[Rita L. Sev]

A well crafted story in senryu form - I could see the cheese and the "mouse" that stole it! :) Smiled at the thought of "lonely crackers".

*in the first senryu, you want its, not it's.

[LawrenceRaybon]

Thank you for your kind words and the tip! The poem has been updated.