Being Silly

The explanation of why I am most assuredly not Silly!

I felt like being silly

but Silly said "No!"

I asked him, "Why?" 

His reply,

"Cause Silly said so!"

So I went and got Angry,

and Angry got mad.

I asked him, "Why?"

His reply,

"Cause Silly is bad!"

Author's Note

Good? Bad? Meh? Anything I can do to improve?

Reviews

[Tori Belle]

I very much enjoyed this! Although, I would love to see more of it. Maybe expand on it? It is a very charming piece of work. (:

[Briana O'Connor]

This is great! I love the humor and the rhythm. The unique characters add an extra umph to the piece as well. Sorry but I have nothing to say about improvement. This is as perfect as perfect can be. One thing I could say as that you could take this further. You could go into several emotions. Each emotion could be a character. Just food for though. Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work!

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I'M STILL LAUGHING.
Can't comment yet on competition..

[Rita L. Sev]

Well, I AM Silly, so I say do as Silly says! :) This feels like the beginning of a longer piece; good, but feels unfinished.

[LawrenceRaybon]

Thank you! I'll look at adding more lines, don't quite know where to take it though...

[Guvi]

haha that was nice :D
add a few more silly lines ;)

[LawrenceRaybon]

Thank you! I see about adding more silly lines, just have to figure out where to take this...