I Love You!

An experiment in shape poetry...

I love you!      I love you!

I love the way you make me smile

I love the way you make me laugh

I love the way you make me feel

Wait, you’re leaving me?

Because loving you

Shouldn't be

About

Me?

Author's Note

Let me know what you think!

Reviews

[Margo Seuss]

I think this heart should have a crack through the middle!

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

That's a really clever poem, that's in a shape of a love heart. Love the creative side of this beautiful piece. Nicely penned.

Kaze~ :-)

[Mercy Fae]

Clever words, and certainly a clever shape made by the stanza and word positioning. Simple yet complex. I like it a lot.

[Ecoolarg]

works, ending make me chuckle, thanks for posting

[Utkarsh Singh]

sir i love that heart u make through ur poem