A Critical PrayerA Poem by LawrenceRaybonThank you God For the sun always shining bright But wouldn’t it be more useful If it shined during the night? And thank you Lord For the rain falling upon the land But don’t you think its more needed In the deserts with their sand? And thank you God For my life, it’s great and yet Do you think, next time around We could be rich and own a jet? © 2014 LawrenceRaybon |
AuthorLawrenceRaybonJackson, MSAboutHi! I'm an avid reader who loves to write. I also love helping others who are serious about improving their writing! My critiques are in-depth and honest, no ego stroking and I expect the same wh.. more..Writing
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