In Your Shell

In Your Shell

A Poem by LawrenceA
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It seemed like paradise, turns out there was a simple exit that I had over looked, and then I was alone.

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In your shell broken to pieces

Do I speak to deaf ears? 

Will you hear my words?

Will you feel my touch dear?


What was I thinking when I left you alone?

Rotting away in such a paradise.

Could there be no better way?

To end such a perfect story?


But I guess you saw that you could leave

That sweet exit 

I guess you pulled that knife for me

You just had to end it all 


What was I thinking when I left you alone?

Rotting away in such a perfect hell

Could there be no sadder way?

To end such a play?

© 2012 LawrenceA


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Some shells when broken. Causes more problems then help. A powerful poem. A lot of thoughts and struggle in the excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


great poem loved it nice work and thanks for sharing your lovely work with me again

Posted 12 Years Ago



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LawrenceA
LawrenceA

Atlanta, GA



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