Sweet No

Sweet No

A Poem by LawrenceA
"

You will break my heart into a million and eleven pieces, but you will help me glue a million and ten back together

"

Have you been thinking about me?

I have been thinking about you

For the longest,

Every breath that passes


You are wrapped in my heart

In my thoughts

In my soul

Tangled in my being


So I know this is going to hurt

I know that I'm going to bleed

But you won't see,

Cause you can't stand the sight of blood…..


And I can't stand the sight of you seeing me cry

I can't take the silence of our hearts

The bittersweet answer I beg for

That sweet no

© 2012 LawrenceA


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A very sad poem. I like the way you expressed the journey into heartbreak before knowing the answer. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


It's like this poem is saying, "Because that's how life works". Speaking right to me. Exploding in my face. It's sad, twisted, but beautiful. It hurts and echoes so many things back into where it came from, but into new entities. This is beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful poetry great job keep up the good work thanks for sharing this with me

Posted 12 Years Ago



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LawrenceA
LawrenceA

Atlanta, GA



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