You See That?

See that face?
You hide it well,
Behind that mask of deception
That your lies foretell
I know you hate it,
The voices in your head
The anixity, the pain, the tourture,
It's getting to your head
Your mask prevents you
From crying out loud
Your mask is your protection 
That keeps you without a connection
You see that face?
You hide it well
Underneath your masks
That your lies foretell
You see that smile?
You see that frown?
That's called expression
You don't use it well
Mask is one word
Mask is a lie
Mask is the thing that will bury you alive
It masks the anger
It masks the tears
A mask is the one thing you hold close, but fear
You see that face?
You hide it well
In this mask of deception
In which your lies for tell
So, do you see it?
Do you see it?

Reviews

[Julius Whimbird]

My interpretation: I see a person that's very stoic and stone-faced. I see another person who's energetic, observant, and a bundle of emotion. The latter person is telling the former that he or she should drop the stone mask they wear and let out those bottled up emotions. Don't let yourself burden all those hardship on your own. Let others help you along the way.

Yes, that's what I imagine when I read this. The only constructive criticism I can give right now is that a few lines sound unfitting and that spelling could be looked at. Of course, spelling is a common mistake and is something that one could easily overlook. I wouldn't fret too much over it. Keep up the excellent work.