A Demon and Angel's Freedom

I kinda made this up with watching Black Butler, Ash vs. Sebastian when Ash said 'But I am an Angel! You are shackled to hell forever!' and Sebastian said 'Then I guess you are shackled to the sky'.

I am shackled to the Earth
You are shackled to the Sky
I am free to roam about
While you are ordered just pass on by
I am free to see the country
While you are just free to see the globe
I am independent in many ways
You are dependent on if it rains today
I am able to meet different people with different ways of life
You are stuck with the Angels forever, never able to put up a fight
I am able to frown, smile, show emotion
Your face is painted with a fake smile forever
I am able to say what's on my mind
While, with you, God plays puppet master  
I am shackled to the Earth
You are shackled to the Sky
Who has more freedom, 
Heaven or Hell?
Who has more freedom? 
You, or I? 

Author's Note

Ignore grammar and spelling problems. Crappy on-the-spot writer (if I can even be called that), NicoRide, at your service here. Heh.

Reviews

[Julius Whimbird]

You actually bring up a good topic there. I believe you interpreted that well but make sure that the words flow and stay in "sync".

"I am able to say what's on my mind
While, with you, God plays puppet master"

This doesn't sound very flow-like. It lacks rhythm and in a few areas this applies. You could replace that line with something like this:

Freedom of speech may I
You with lips tainted by lie

Just a suggestion. Please take this as constructive criticism and keep on writing!