Make Me Cry

I kinda just wrote this up on the spot cause I was bored and I saw this sign on here that said 'make me cry'.

Make me cry

I love the pain

Make me cry

It keeps me sane

Make me cry

With salty tears

Make me cry

Face my fears

Make me cry

Bring me the pain

Make me cry

It keeps me sane

Make me cry

My salty tears

Make me cry

Face my fears

Reviews

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i like the repetitive parts because it makes your point and the reader really understands ... it was a really good poem and i don't like doing this but i have to when you said " it keeps me sane" the second time you have a typo in keeps... still awesome poem