Crying is Beautiful

Crying is Beautiful

A Poem by NicoRide
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I found this poem on Quizilla and I wanted to write it down here because I find it so beautiful and so true. Please rate, comment, and enjoy!!

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Crying is beautiful

In the face of fear

When darkness is surrounding

And misery is near

Crying is beautiful

Especially when it rains

Filled with hopeless longing

When I feel such pain

Crying is beautiful

When I remember you

I surrender my broken heart

It is all that I can do

Crying is beautiful

In the cold hands of fate

Constricted by mercy

And the need to create

Crying is beautiful

In the darkness of the night

I do ot struggle anymore

I've given up this fight

Crying is beautiful

With watering blue eyes

Heavy with words

And ever-lasting goodbyes

Crying is beautiful

When I hide my frown

Behind a mask of deception

In these lies I'll drown

Crying is beautiful

With my head bowed low

Hiding my wet cheeks

It's all tha I know

Crying is beautiful

I cannot deny

I'll stay this way forever

Forever I'll cry

© 2011 NicoRide


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Tears help wash the slate anew to gain new perspective and make room for new developments. They help alleviate the soul of some of the burden. Wonderful poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Tears release pain and hurt. Good to cry and show the people around you. You are still alive. Not cold and heartless. I like the flow and the desire of this poem. Thank you for the excelelnt poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yes even the world must shed a tear for the sun to shine again.
Excellent write.


Posted 12 Years Ago


It is lovely, so glad you shared it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Crying is a way to cleanse the soul and it is beautiful. You have a pleasant flow that draws the reader in keeping them enthralled. Nice work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow how you've given us this very strong image
Of crying is beautiful it's also a way to release painful
emotions its a way to cleanse your soul tears are
beautiful because they are also tears of joy
you've written to my heart and soul here
You write very beautiful and unique
brilliant piece!
Hugsss :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 4, 2011
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