Chapter 1

"Mr. Scott would you kindly wake up." A stern voice says rather close to my head.

I groggily lift my head up to see my professor standing in front of me. He is a tall, middle aged but muscular man. His shoulders are so broad you can see his muscles through his tight  suit. This is Professor Hock, my history professor and unfortunately my step father. 

"Are you up now?" He asks me

You know the answer old man I think to myself

"Yes da-" I am about to say until he cuts me off, leaning in close.

"In class I am not your father I am your teacher Scott." He reminds me for probably the 1000th time this year. 

"Of course sir, I'm sorry sir." I correct myself.

"Good, maybe you can tell us then; who was it that founded our great kingdom?" He asks

Easy question, well for me anyway, I freaking love history so I know almost everything. I especially am infatuated with the 200 man invasion. 

Which was when a group of Warriors led an invasion of 200 men and women into London to try to take the city back. They half succeeded, stopped  by the heavy casualties they took. They had begun with 200 with roughly 100 other survivors found on the way. When they came back to Free, they were only 62 people left including two of the five warriors. Now there stands three separate kingdoms, each with an academy named after the three brave warriors who died. There is ours, Jeralt, to the South there is Kane, and to the East there is Adam. And to our west is a kingdom of vagabonds and rogues known as Bay. 

"Fay sir. He was the strongest Warrior and the original one. His son now leads us." I answer

"Yes that is correct. Good job." He says to me with a hint of a smile. 

The bell rings and everyone rushes out the door. I start to pack up my book and begin to leave when my dad says wait.

"Yeah?"

"You are leaving for Jeralt soon. I told the headmaster about you. He wants to have a private talk with you this evening. I will be on a mission so it will just be you and him." He explained.

I nodded "Ok. I will be sure to make a good impression dad."

"Ok Scott. I love you."

"I love you too."

I walk out the door and check my phone, finding a missed call from my best friend. I text him letting him know that I will call him when I'm home. 

"Hurry, we have a problem." He sends back

Reviews

[Splatman73]

So overall your writing is good. You could use a little work on formatting and there was only one grammar mistake I really noticed (in the "Easy Question" paragraph, you had a dependent clause that needed to be with an independent clause). It is also unclear (at least to me) whether Jeralt, Kane, and Adam are the schools or the kingdoms. Keep up the good work.

[LavamanScott]

Jeralt, Kane, and Adam is both the academy and the school. Although I have been thinking of changing that.

[HeyJadeXO]

I really like the dynamic between the father and son.The characters are really strong. The format was a little difficult to follow but overall great job !