Hungover

The true meaning of fulfillment.

I’ve been dragging
Feet, so accustomed
To lagging
Behind Me
Flailing arms
With shaky
Palms
Steadily, we
Digest
The true meaning of
This love

Reviews

[Crowley]

Haa...my hangover is usually the other kind, not much in the way of future or relationship to consider. But this really conjures up that feeling of "what is happening" very well and the considerable weight that the heart can place on the mind. Its a good hangover most of the time. Loved it!

[Laurierose]

Nothing like being love drunk, huh? Haha. Thank you for the review, friend!

[Shep]

every day feeling the moment I get out of bed. nicely done

[Laurierose]

Thank you for the kind review!

[barleygirl]

I have had friends & loved ones who felt so toxic, later on it felt like I had a hangover & needed to restore my inner balance by meditating after being together with them. Your description of this sounds different in details, but understandable & relatable feelings! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Laurierose]

As always Margie, it's great reading such thoughtful reviews. I appreciate the perspective.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Never thought of being hung over after a love...but I guess in a way...we who attempt to find love do suffer from this... excellent write.

[Laurierose]

Love does leave a trace. Thank you for the kind review!

[Chris]

Quite a visual image of a uncommon reality

[Laurierose]

Indeed, it may be. Thank you for the sincere review.

[Chris]

Welcome...

[pia]

what a great poem!! i feel like the poem expresses being hungover as a meaning of what happens after a heart break or like the feeling after you fall out of love
loved the poem though

[Laurierose]

I'm sorry i'm just seeing this! But thank you! I drew the sluggishness of an actual hangover as a mode to convey this message. I do like your interpretation and perspective of this. Thank you for the sincere review!