When That Moment Happens

And when that moment happens
I will know it for sure
I will finally stretch out these wings
That were so afraid to soar
It’ll move throughout my body
And tickle my veins
Make me smile
Feeling no shame
When that moment happens
It’ll be monumental
My time to shine
My moment for life
I’ll write a sonnet
Or perhaps a ballad
And with each of those lines
It will poetically tell that story
The one I was too afraid to utter
Too afraid to think of
That gave my stomach a flutter
It will come as a rush
My face will blush
That perfect painting
Or that perfect song
That invites the crowd to sing along
At the edge of your seat
A heart once shy
Will skip a beat
Toes curling
Head whirling
Vision swirling
And then it stops
Awaiting in the midst your passion
So be brave and leap
When that moment happens

Reviews

[Steph_F90]

I really enjoyed this. It flowed perfectly, and the pace seemed to quicken towards the end before hitting the word 'stop' and bringing the pace back down a notch. I am a huge fan of repetition within poetry to convey a message and you've nailed it here. Brilliant.

[Laurierose]

I'm glad you caught the tempo change here and that you enjoyed reading. I appreciate it. Thank you!

[barleygirl]

When that moment happens, we have to at least be open to the possibilities. That’s why it’s good practice to believe in something whimsical in between times, so we can stay in good practice for pouncing on a likely opportunity. Your poem shows how that can be done using a dynamic mix of wordplay (“gave my stomach a flutter” . . . “toes curling, head whirling, vision swirling”) . . . we can’t mope around & wonder why some jolt of interest hasn’t been attracted into our lives. We have to pull ourselves up by our bootstraps, despite loneliness or depression or anxiety, etc. Fake it until we make it. That’s what your poem reminds me of, which was my mantra several decades ago. Your poem is very inspirational as far as encouraging us to be open and not try to overly restrict or define what we wish to fly by & into our lives (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Amazing- in the height and depth of passion- in that moment all time stands still- best moment in time- 🌹

[Laurierose]

And when that moment happens, we'll forever remember the feeling. Trapped in our memory where we'll cherish forever. Thank you!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Forever my pleasure🌹

[Onlyme]

Profoundly monumental and spiritually enriching moment when that time does arrive. Beautiful expressed and felt.

[Laurierose]

I'm glad you enjoyed reading this. This was a joy to create because I wanted to transmit so much feeling into this piece. Thank you for the review.

[wordman]

and a beautiful moment it will be

[Laurierose]

Absolutely! Thank you for the kind review.

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Planet x]

A heart once shy
Will skip a beat
Toes curling
Head whirling
Vision swirling
And then it stops
Awaiting in the midst your passion

I am in love with your poetry and that's the best so far
The flow , the timing the sensual writing

[Laurierose]

Thanks again :)