Cherry Blossom

Transparent pearls fall
'pon leaves -
so green
mists of May bring forth
ticking beauty
lone cherry blossom
a floret on nature's tree
visions - love to come
permanent, not the flower
'tis tree's roots
that live on forever.

Reviews

[SLY Girl]

LOVE this poem's simplicity, its charming. Words, enchanting - and thought-evoking. You definitely have a talent! Keep writing! I love your poems so much, they make my day! :)

[J.Nico]

When words blossom into poems...

[Rene Velez]

A nice collection of words brought together well. Colorful imagery.

[Shapirta]

wow! short yet good! love it! continue to post writings!

[micky]

Short and sweet Laurie:p And although I have never seen a cherry blossom you make them sound awesome

[Vito]

An enlightening piece with easy flow of thought, smooth rhythm and abundant mind-opening content!

[yuki]

awww so cute!!!! really love cherry blossoms there so pretty :)

[Gamitsuki]

BeAuTiFuL........
Truly nice piece....!!
Keep Going.....
I will be seeing to your poems....! :-)

[MomzillaNC]

"Transparent pearls fall…" and "tis tree's roots; that live on forever." Great stuff.

I recommend you increase the font size and change the font color to something darker. That magenta and tiny font are hard on old eyes! :D

[Patrick]

This is perfectly penned and beautifully said!