G-R-O-U-N-D

Lord I want to you to bend down and touch the ground

Take the darkened plans into your hands

In the soil is where I lay

you'll find my soul there

Press your palms into the dirt

Lift me up from the ground

Take the soaked ink from my wings

brush them clean

Bury yourself under my skin

write the words upon my back before you stab it

The sky is so much cleaner than the ground

My wings remain dry

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Sounds like you feel alone, abandoned and hurt and numb. Feeling as though you are missing out in life. So shun away from it. And tend to keep to yourself. The majority of the time. I feel your sadness and pain. And also understand you want to be refreshed and healed and renewed and more so love and to grow as a person and for who you are really inside and out.

[Ghoul]

This comment is spot on, not everyone can understand the message behind the words on a screen but you did. I don't wish upon anyone to have these feelings.

[Onlyme]

Iam sorry you feel like this. You are not alone I do understand you. hugs. Dawn.

[angel]

Have mercy,Loz. I was with you, until I came to the words STAB IT. i just don't know what to make of that. Please, I want to understand. Explain it to me.

[Ghoul]

'Stab it' is referring to when people makes statements about you behind your back, being two faced, a back stabber despite having the face of a helping friend.

[angel]

Heavens; I hope that hasn't happened to you a lot. I'm so sorry. I am sure, though, that that won't happen in the case of the Lord. Thank you for telling me; may you have better friends than you seem to have had, in the future.

[Ghoul]

Its okay life may only get better if you push your self in the directions of help and a more positive environment which is what I've done.

[angel]

I'm very glad to hear that. I do wish you all the best.