Disharmony

Disharmony

A Poem by Laurena
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My head and my heart are not in accord.

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I'm caught in the webbing of my own mind.
I'm twisted and turned into awkward contortions.
I'm mixing up right, with left and wrong.

And our love is flipped within this messy cavern.
So let me down easy with your actions and words
My head and my heart are not in accord.

© 2014 Laurena


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I like how this little piece reveals to us the terrible complexity of the internal thought process of heartbreak, and how fragile we become lost in our pain. This was so subtle, yet so magnificently filled with truth. Very nice write, Laurena!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Laurena

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the feedback .

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Laurena
Laurena

Redlands, CA



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