The guy who gave her everything

A Poem by Lauren:D

He tells you he loves you

You get up and leave

He gave you his heat

Which you wiped on your sleeve

He trusted you

But the advantage you took

And all for what

Just a quick f**k?

He gave you his heart

You took it away

Is this the price

He has to pay?

You tore him up

Ripped him apart

Right from the beginning

Between finish and start

Now there's no trust

No love to give

He see's no reason

For him to live...

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This is really good, the rhyming pattern's flawless (:

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Added on May 28, 2011
Last Updated on May 28, 2011

Haii :) I'm Lauren, New at this but not at writing, I always make up stories, songs or poems hardly finish them but I will on here :D more..

All he wanted

Taken away