Just BreatheA Story by Lauren PaulyShort Story that still needs some work, incorporates/will incorporate mystery, romance, and supernatural elements. I
am not breathing. My lungs fill with water and I feel myself sinking, but all I
can think about is the fact that I am not breathing. 'This is not drowning,’ I
tell myself, ‘drowning is different.’ But how would I know? I have never
drowned. A
loud and ominous boom fills my ears, the crack of vicious thunder above the
surface of the lake. I feel the lake bed now, a soft and sticky pillow of mud
and silt. I hear a somewhat distant burbling, someone making a desperate
underwater cry. Magically,
my body floats upward until a flailing silhouette meets my eye. I can barely
make out any facial features, but I already know I am seeing myself. Drowning,
sinking, pleading for help. I watch my body sink until swallowed by the darkness of
the depth, leaving only a trail of bubbles. My viewpoint drifts, down down
down, until the moonlight flickers over a face paler than the moon itself. Me
again. I reach down, slowed by the water to feel a pulse, a
heartbeat, but I know I am dead. But if I am dead, how can I see? Feel? Know? My
body is still and lifeless, pale and slightly blue with the effects of
hypothermia. Suddenly I--the dead one-- begin rising, my body fluttering upward
as though gravity has suddenly reversed. I am drawn towards it, curious and
confused. As I near the surface of the lake along with my body, the color
returns to the skin that had once been blue, I can literally see the blood
recirculating. My now alive body breaks
the water’s surface, and"everything goes black. ~ I
gasp and my eyes burst open. I am trembling, splashing around and coughing up lake
water. What has happened? I do not understand, only moments before I was so
calm, and suddenly I am terrified. ‘Deep
breaths,’ I coax myself into relaxing. I float on my back until I steady my
breathing and heart rate, then prepare to return to shore when an invisible
force whips me back under by my waist. I
suck in a gulp of air that quickly turns to into water and choke on the liquid
I inhaled. I struggle again, kicking and screaming and punching at the empty
water that surrounds me. © 2016 Lauren PaulyAuthor's Note
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1 Review Added on June 15, 2016 Last Updated on June 15, 2016 AuthorLauren PaulyColorado Springs, COAboutMiddle School Student- I am looking at a career as an author, and I have many short-medium stories that are self-written and would like to get some feedback. more..Writing
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