Picky Declan

For Creative Writing AS

How dare she dump him? He didn’t like her anyway. He was well shot to be rid of her. He didn’t care, it’s not like she didn’t have her faults, like never properly closing the door, or walking through the house in her shoes. And she always had that one annoying piece of hair that always got in the way! 

“Calling him picky! In what way was he picky?” he bitterly thought while tilting the shade of his lamp slightly to the left.

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

How can someone be picky and yet ignore so many faults lol. I like his point of view. Nice job! :)