Just me, myself and pain

The pain is ripping, burning,
seeping through my body,
I want to cry out for help,
scream and shout,
but there will be nobody,
nobody,
to hold me, hear me,
comfort me,
I'm all alone,
Just me, myself, and pain

Author's Note

I'm not good at poetry at all. And I wrote this a long time ago so... I just wanted to know what you think about it and just give me a review! Thanks!

Reviews

[Jonathan Ballam]

Ripping and burning is long and continuous.

My thoughts are left to wonder and bounce on the -ings. How about acid ache, or cruel chaos?

However...you've come to the right place to grow and learn. Nice to have you here Lauren!

Thank you for sharing ;)

[Jersey]

It's actually really good, you should try to do more poetry. Anybody that tells you otherwise is wrong or just needs to re-think poetry. If that makes sense

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this is really good. I feel like this everyday...thanks for sharing. :)