Fairytale

Fairytale

A Poem by Laurel Ducky
"

I'm a hopeless romantic

"

 He's there for me when I need him 
Comforting me in his arms 
Backrubs and soft kisses 
"just because" and "for being beautiful" 
This is the man in my head 

He talks to me and listens 
Tells me whats going on 
Inside jokes and secret touches 
Dancing just to be close to me 
This is the man in my head 

His eyes light up when he sees me 
As he kisses me 'hello' 
Games and wordplay till two in the morning 
Singing a perfect duet 
This is the man in my head 

He picks me up and twirls me around 
Makes me want to show off 
Seeking me out whenever he can 
... 
This is the man in my head.

© 2008 Laurel Ducky


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I loved this! Gosh, I wish I could find a guy like that!! I think he's in my head too! Very good. I liked the flow. Good poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


A sweet romantic write

Posted 16 Years Ago


A nice picture of the ideal companion. Gentle, generous, and willing to communicate.

Posted 16 Years Ago


A sweet romantic write. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 16 Years Ago


i love how the last line of every stanza is "this is the man in my head"
it really emphasizes the point and has a good rhythm

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 16, 2008

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Laurel Ducky
Laurel Ducky

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I live in the Bay Area of California and I am enjoying it while I can. I am not a big writer, but I like publishing the stuff that I like and getting feedback. I'm big on poems, and kinda OCD about ge.. more..

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