A Thought Repainted

A Thought Repainted

A Poem by Laura Sui

What happens to a thought repainted?
Does it bleed through
like a marker dipped in water?
Or melt in the sun
like a slowly dying daughter?
Does it crack like desert rock?
Or harden and hide out
like a pad lock?
Maybe it just fades
like a vintage sketch.

Or does it rip and stretch? 

© 2012 Laura Sui


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LAURA YOU NEVER TOLD ME YOU WERE SUCH A POET. Lovely darling.

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice rhyme scheme and an enjoyable read. I could feel this write

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on April 25, 2012
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Laura Sui
Laura Sui

Northborough, MA



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I'm Laura! I'm from a cute little suburb out of Boston. I quite enjoy the arts and playing and performing music. If you'd like some insight on what I'm like, visit my tumblr blog! http://hors-de-.. more..

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