The secretA Story by Laura MoniqueThe sky has finally darkend, and it was what we weren't expecting, now what--
"John! What the hell is that? Do you see it" Marcus pointed up above the MGM Grand.
His voice sounded like he was in great dispair, and his eyes grew big. A large darkend cloud appointed itself a postion right above the huge green building, It didn't move, but it didn't make a sound either. Marcus, and John both frozen in place stare cluelessly. Suddenly a large flash of lightening struck the top of the building. Quickly sending Marcus, and John running the complete opposite direction.
"What, what--" John gasping for air couldnt even finish his sentence.
I couldn't understand what he was thinking? It was just a storm? Why were we hiding behind a suburban? Why did he tell his wife to go to church and pray. I got inside my car, and sat wondering as rain began to pour. The past couple weeks he had been reading book s about the end of the world. But--This surely wasn't it. It couldn't be it. Most definalty wasn't. Now his life is gone, and his wife is hopelessly praying at church. But for what? To come and find that her husband shot himself? How will that reflect her view toward god. Man I wish he would have thought this trhough. Most people don't think when they let their mistakes gather. Why didn't he tell me sooner? Who did he cheat with, and where does this leave his wife, and kids?
should i continue? I was just bored and just wrote what ever came to mind? What kinda turns do you guys see this going? © 2008 Laura Monique |
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Added on July 10, 2008 AuthorLaura MoniqueUT, LV, L.A, N.Y, UTAboutLaura Monique, I've been writing for about 2 years now-- Well okay, since I could hold up a pencil but you know what i mean. Trying to actually write stories and all. : ) Basically I do it for me, and.. more..Writing
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