Flames

I sit in front of the glowing fire

and watch the flames make love to each other.

There is something about their seductive dance

that puts me into a euphoric trance.

a burning sensation in my heart;

not caused by the flames’ magnificent art-

makes me look across at you

and that’s when I realize

you are watching them too.

Author's Note

I'm not too sure about this piece, I feel like it needs more work to it. Feedback, please :)

Reviews

[Brook]

This is beautiful, no work needed, it's amazing all on it's own.
It flows so well, such a great job!

[Laura Harrison]

Thank you, I guess I just always feel like my work is never complete or good enough lol