Destroyed

I remember all those hurtful names you called me years ago;

They torment my mind and infest on my soul

You made me weak with every sharp-tongued word you threw my way

And you offered me a hand off the ground just so you could push me down again

You made me sink into the chasm of self-hate and depression

And made me find my way to the blade that now rules my life

 

You told me that I was worthless

Now I am

You told me that I should kill myself

Now I want to

You tried to destroy me-

But I got there first

Reviews

[Neon]

"And you offered me a hand off the ground just so you could push me down again" your this line make me sad because i hate seeing someone as nice as you feel hurt at all .. i hate those people who hurt angels and push them down on the ground only for their joy ...

.... Who says even who the hell told ya your worthless?
you ain't a worthless even you ain't a playing thing that's called worthless ..your an angel, your a human-being and every angel has her right to fly with her freedom... those who think your worthless may be to the world they're worthless thing ever...

... Who wants to kill you or wants to cut down yer wings of flying?
No body can cut-down angel's wings' even no one has right to touch angels, they're unique and made for those who keep them happy, peaceful into the bucket of flowers and don't give them pain even never bring tears on their face .. and those who do then to the world, they're worthless ever and they hell yeah! Pay for it right into the bottom of the "Hell" coz, no one can spoil anyone's life especially angel's life.

Your this poem's emotional and very painful. I hate seeing beautiful angels into troubles... but the men always put women alias angels into much pain and troubles... and that's what I damn hate.
Anyway ... Very realistic poem.



Oh! By the way ... I didn't know this pretty angel writes review too so, I couldn't control myself to write give ya review as well coz, i thought it'd be rude not to return the favor to this beautiful angel so did I :)
And .. Keep smiling and spreading the scent of your kind beauty around the world.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is a very sad depressing peace, so much emotion and meaning in those words.
I hope your no longer destroyed, you shouldn't let anyone destroy you :)
I love the emotion and honesty in this piece....
Great write :)

[FlatLineBeauty]

Simple, honest, and to the point. I love your work. xo Winter

[Vidya Bacchus]

I love how simple and honest your poetry is and filled with such passion.Good as usual my friend

[Ruth]

It takes courage to face such darkness...not weakness...but strength, and we can only rise when we feel this way...love to you x

[ToneWolf]

This is another poem from you that is extreme. You write about love and hate, happiness and misery. Strong stuff!