Something About You

There is something captivating about the way you say my name

It’s a delicate whisper that takes my breath away.

There’s something about the way you kiss me that makes me feel brave;

That makes me able to drive my fears away.

There’s a certain kind of euphoria when your body collides with mine;

An electrifying shock that shoots up my spine…

 

But there’s that old familiar feeling of depression in me tonight

The one that tells me that you never do anything right

The one that pushes you away when you try to hold me close

And tells you that I don’t love you when I love you the most.

But just as I am about to walk out of the door

There’s something about you that makes me fall into your arms once more.

Reviews

[Rose of many colours]

Lovely song here, great rhyming. very romantic with an edge of sadness

[Kitten]

This is a great poem! You used the words well and the imagery and message is crystal clear! I really enjoy it, great work :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

your poem is lovely even if you only took a couple mins to write

[Laura Harrison]

Thank you Vidya :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

you are welcome my friend