I Fell In Love

I fell in love with your words

And how you tell me all your hopes and dreams

I fell in love with the way you kiss me

And how you are always there

When I fall apart at the seams

I fell in love with your eyes

So gentle and kind

And how you make everything alright

I fell in love with the way your hands

Gently caress my body

And how when we are apart

You say you missed me

I fell in love with your laugh

And your beautiful smile

And how you make every day seem worthwhile

I fell in love with everything you do

But I never planned on falling in love with you

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

An interesting read my friend...
I liked the way this flows, and the story you tell here. I fell in love with.....and then the final line which kind of jolts the reader into the moment again....following the reverie of the prose...yes, I liked this.
Thanks for sharing...
BB

[FlatLineBeauty]

This was gorgeous. Loved it. xo Winter

[Rayree Parker]

this is the first "Happy love" poem i have read here that actually made me smile and brought back beautiful memories of that feeling... super random been many many moons THANK-YOU!!!!!!!!!!

[Sami Khalil]

"fell in love with your laugh

And your beautiful smile

And how you make every day seem worthwhile

I fell in love with everything you do

But I never planned on falling in love with you"

A lovely and sweet write...Thank you for sharing...:)...................

[Simon Welsh]

Love is a many headed beast. Love this.

[Rose of many colours]

Great piece of work..you are going places. that i can see

[David Burke]

You've got talent kido, you never cease to amaze me lol

[ARuth]

great job! :) i fell in love with your words ♥

[Vidya Bacchus]

this poem sounds like someone who fell in love without actually realizing when it was happening.But that is what happens, you love things about a person until you realize you love the whole package.Great writing hon.