Liquid Solidity

Are you sleeping

...Churning the concrete 

into a hazey dream...

A passing thought

The slight stirring of 

A luke warm, swirley clouded cup

of weak coffee?

These walls

  Dew drenched drops 

of solidity...cling quivering.

Double edged constant rays piercing

the petrified flame.

These walls

Awake in the madness of 

illusive illusion...

Or could it be mercury submerged

in brilliant yellow?

Here the whispers echo.

Vessels purge milky red.

Worthiness evades me...

  taunting and teasing.

Yet

  I'll reach 

and sleep no more.

Reviews

[Neville]

No matter which way one looks at them, these words hold meaning, whether my various interpretations are spot on, or a million miles off mark, matters not.... what matters, is that they are considered by more folk who frequent these pages...and more often....... Neville

[Glass Heart Inc]

Could not help but read this a few times. It's really gripping. I like the interesting structure.I also liked your switching between ellipsis and full stops to make the flow of the poem different... Good work.

[Little Whisper]

Thank you so for your kind review... and your time. :)