Destiny

Sin Strikes a Woman

The apple is delightful

Destiny is Doomed

Author's Note

I wrote this one in high school

Reviews

[Makayi Marlon]

Good piece of writing there,so true and real..continue,love your writes

[Laura3841]

Thank you Makayi!

[Lizardo]

it took those little 3 lines to attract so much attention, wow, this is wonderful

[Laura3841]

Thank you so much lizardo98. :) I was only 17 when I wrote this but like all my writing, it's always been a part of me. Thank you for reading this. :)

[Lizardo]

You are welcome :)

[Arsh]

Excellent. Only 3-words of your heart took the breath of your readers away of their hearts. Indeed. Well, you may be well grown now but i`m sure, when you`d written this write with your beautiful hand.. would reminded your "high-school" days.. didn`t you? And.. yeah, old days are best but sadly, no one can stop them. They`re meant to be gone.. so is life. You always steal the breath of my heart writing such deep pieces! Keep it up!

[Laura3841]

Thank you Arsh! :)

[Arsh]

Do you know, what the best thing I`m doing since yesterday? Hovering ov`r your pages! Lol (smile)read moreDo you know, what the best thing I`m doing since yesterday? Hovering ov`r your pages! Lol (smile)
Never-mind, i`m honor to keep you in my heart. You going good. Keep writing!

[Arsh]

Do you know, what the best thing I`m doing since yesterday? Hovering ov`r your pages! Lol (smile)Never-mind, i`m honor to keep you in my heart. You going good. Keep writing!

[Laura3841]

Thank you!! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. I liked how you combined sin and destiny. Later in life we learn. Sin is part of life and destiny is our decision. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Laura3841]

Coyote, I agree with you 100% And sin is part of what makes us wonderful because of the many things we learn from it and the character it gives us.