I Love You...

God I’m bored, why is there nothing on TV on a Saturday morning? I’m sitting in my lounge flicking through my channels. There might be like 900 channels but there’s still nothing on. Most of them are showing little kiddie shows because of the weekend. Just great. I’m lying on my black leather couch and have my red blanket around me. Before I get the chance to give up with my s**t TV, my phone rings. I answer. “Hello, this is Susan speaking.” Well who else if going to be here?

“Yes hello, this is just Mr flashy pants here. He was wondering if you are free tonight.” I laugh.

“When are you going to get over the name calling? I said I was sorry about that.”

“Don’t know I like to have some fun. But are you free?”

 “I might be, I’d have to check with my diary.”

“That’s nice seeing as we both know you don’t have one.”

“Ok,ok you got me. Well I am free tonight.”

“Good pick up at 6? Yeah good, see you then.” The phone cuts off. Well how charming of my new boyfriend. Wow it sounds weird saying that word. Wow our first official date.

 

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I hear the door knock. Ahh s**t I’m not ready. “5 more minutes,” I shout. Ahh ok just double check I have everything. Ok dressed, check, got my bag, check, Makeup done, check, hair done, check. Ok yep ready. “Coming,” I shout again. I open the door and see a very handsome John at the door. His blonde hair is gelled back and he’s body is covered with a very smart tux.

 

Wow Susan looks amazing. Part of her curly ginger, brown hair is tied back but the rest flows down her back. Her body is covered with a black dress which I no this is inappropriate to say but god it shows off her breasts. I’m a man, I have needs.  Her brown eyes really stand out with the sparkly makeup. She looks so dazzling.

 

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We’re dancing again, the same place as last time. John is holding me close to he’s chest and we are spinning throughout the room. Muse’s Unintended is playing. What is it with this place and Muse? Oh well, I liked the other one better. It had more powerful lyrics, this one is still romantic. Also I wouldn’t be anywhere else at this moment. Then John mouth comes to my ear, I guess he’s going to sing some dreamy lyrics to me.

“I love you.” Did he just say that? My body is tingling. He loves me. My heart is doing summersaults again.  I know deep in my heart that he means it and that no matter what he is my soul mate now. Just from those 3 little words. I look at him and he looks worried. “Is that ok? You’re not saying anything.”

“It’s ok, it’s perfect. You know what John, I love you too. I mean it, I really do.”

Author's Note

Not my best but Enjoy!

Reviews

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F*****g needs?!!! Laura!!! You can't say men have needs!!! You can say they have desires or fancies or... enjoy eye-candy, but you can't say they have needs!!! That's like... special needs or something. You're ridiculous! But leave it in, it makes me laugh and it'll arouse some controversey (sp?).
Um... hm... I liked it. A lot. Is this what you were doing in Mc... whatever it's called? while the rest of us were dying in the freezing cold? lol
Punctuation is all. There are a couple of missing commas and question marks. Don't WORRY about them - just CORRECT them! lol They won't take two seconds. I'm not going to be so patronising as to point them out.
All in all, I loved it. Again! I think you've got something here. I really love the narrative, you know? the way every word is just a thought. It's great!!
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