Written in Stone

A Book by Chipgirl

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© 2010 Chipgirl

Author's Note

Plz tell me my mistakes! Also if u can think of a better way 2 end it coz i think at the mo it's not right. plz tell me!

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I think that you could beef it up a little..maybe elaborate about your childhood and what you believed in...the fairytale ideal's held by children..and the envitability of death ...Your idea is fine ..not sure where this is going but as you like vampires and it' about death then I guess it's a vampire story? I will read you chapters..unfortunately the subject is a little saturated currently..especially with the Twilight Saga..hope you have a twist to it..nice start though..Im intrigued so that's a good sign!!

Posted 14 Years Ago

Chipgirl

ok thanks for that! That does work! thanks! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

Kes

For the end, laura, just cut off the 'your'. Wouldn't that work?
I really like this! I like the style, the way you're addressing the reader. No mistakes! Yay!
Fantastic! Off to read next bit!
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