Murdered DreamA Poem by Saerdes RaeThis is just a poem that I put together for a project in my American Literature class. I re-wrote the sixth chapter of Of Mice and Men by John Steinbeck as a poem.
The Salinas River,
whose waters seem a deep green, remained still that afternoon. The trees dipped and waved as a harsh gust of wind came through. Lennie came from the bushes, as quiet as a mouse, to drink from the water. Then he sat and waited; "Hide in the brush an' wait for George." An old woman appeared, slightly plump and wearing an apron. She frowned down at Lennie hands on her hips. She did not approve. She spoke to Lennie her voice his own and he replied. "I tried, Aunt Clara... I tried and tried." She told him to think of George and that he had never given him a thought. She said that without Lennie George may have been better off. Lennie agreed, disheartened, and said he'd go away. The woman did not believe him, told him he'd just stay and bother George, and Lennie worried about the rabbits. The woman was gone, replaced by a rabbit! The rabbit spoke to Lennie its voice his own telling him he wasn't fit "to lick the boots of no rabbit." "You'd forget 'em and let 'em go hungry." Lennie disagreed. The rabbit continued his mocking telling Lennie he wasn't good enough and said George would agree. He said George would leave and leave Lennie behind and Lennie was scared. He didn't think George would leave him but he was scared anyway. Suddenly, George came pushing the rabbit back into poor Lennie's brain. Lennie expressed his fears of George leaving and was relieved when George said he'd do nothing of the sort. Lennie told him he'd messed up again; George didn't seem to care. Lennie was confused when George didn't "give him hell" so George did just that. But he didn't give him much. Lennie said he could go away, but George wanted him to stay. They had the talk they've had a million times before how they both have each other and couldn't ask for more. The wind blew again rustling the trees and the shouts of men drifted to them on the breeze. George began to tell Lennie how it all would be. When Lennie looked away, George brought out his gun, telling the story slowly. As he continued his story of how it all would be he looked down at his gun then raised and steadied it. One pull of the trigger and the lifeless body slumped forward. George sat still again looking down at Lennie. The men came to the clearing congratulated George and, helping him up, they led George away. I guess his story of how it all would be, of the place, the cow, the rabbits, was little more than poor Lennie's murdered dream. © 2013 Saerdes RaeAuthor's Note
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StatsAuthorSaerdes RaeGAAboutHi! I go by many names, but you can call me Saerdes. ^-^ I spend most of my free time reading and writing (novels, short stories, poetry, etc.), and I decided I'd like to share some of my things with .. more..Writing
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