BIG TOP

BIG TOP

A Poem by Lathen Griffiths

Your heads a big top
with a travelling show,
a circus you take with you
wherever you go,
your mind delights, as the band starts to play,
you open your eyes, and your on your way.

There’s a tightrope that’s stretched
like a string through the air
with thoughts that are balanced
precariously there.
The jugglers juggle, decisions to be made
all possibilities must be carefully weighed.
You find yourself smiling then on comes the clown
turning your sad face, upside down.

And you my friend, are ring master supreme,
In charge of the show,
and living the dream.

©️ 2021 Lathen Griffiths

© 2023 Lathen Griffiths


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The jugglers juggle, decisions to be made
all possibilities must be carefully weighed.
You find yourself smiling then on comes the clown
turning your sad face, upside down.

Oh I LOVE this part...
this is so good.
A most enjoyable read

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ringmaster Supreme...
Sometimes, it feels like some demented demon has stolen center ring. Just when I think the show's going well, the tightrope breaks.
An interesting metaphor, my friend. Well written.

Posted 2 Years Ago


too often we think we are in charge...but our foolishness becomes the main attraction of the circus.
And all the spectators are tittering at us...
we are falling off the tightrope....and there is no net.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lathen Griffiths

2 Years Ago

I think you are right, the biggest and last laugh is that we are all spectators and also we are all .. read more

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Added on January 28, 2022
Last Updated on April 8, 2023
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Lathen Griffiths
Lathen Griffiths

United Kingdom



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