Echo

Listen,
Listen,
There it is,
There it is,


There’s an echo,
There’s an echo,
Can you hear it?
Can you hear it?


Hello,
Hello,
La la la,
La la la,


There’s an echo,
There’s an echo,
Echo.
Echo.

©️ 2021 Lathen Griffiths

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like this
I like this
what was that song by the Delphonics?
La La means I love you
yes that was it
yes that was it......
When we play tennis on Saturdays...we are at one end of the courts...and if we yell there is an echo all the way down on the other end.
eerie how that happens...
this poem is fun, but it also reminds me how we are reflections of ourselves...
and often echoes reflect our inner voice.
j.

[Lathen Griffiths]

Many thanks Jacob,

All the best,

Lathen

[Chris Shaw]

It was good to read this one again Lathe. There is something fascinating about listening to an echo. Hope you have a good Easter and yes it is unusually quiet on the forum. It happens from time to time :)

Chris

[Lathen Griffiths]

Thank you Chris, you are so wonderful. As for the lower viewing figures, I’m rarely there myself and you’re always at the top, so it’s not us causing these conflicts.

all the best

Lathe

[lightsong]

Wow! though this is simply written but it holds a power, the power of the voice, the voices of the past, our voices... and as I was reading it, I was reading it with a voice and echo! so creative my friend!

[jennifer little]

very interesting poem great write keep up the good work

[Lathen Griffiths]

Many thanks Jennifer

All the best

Lathen

[JE Falcon]

LOL, --- LOL, LOl, Lol, lol --- I HEARD IT TOO, Heard It Too, heard it too. ...

[Lathen Griffiths]

Lol, thanks for stopping by JE Falcon

Lathen

[Abhishek]

An awesome and Amazing poetry by lathen.
sounding so fantastic.

Abhishek

[Lathen Griffiths]

Many thanks Abhishek, hope your Monday is going well.

Lathen

[poetgurl]

This is really clever and cute
i enjoyed this

[Lathen Griffiths]

Many thanks.


Lathen

[emmajoy]

This really is a unique post plus. has a smile wrapped around it too! Have read about echoes and echoing before but never in your way. Am now tempted to see what happens if i try shouting inside a wardrobe> Maybe the dust-mites,spiders etc will self-evict. Echoes are a form of unexpected magic at times.

[Lathen Griffiths]

:) They do seem quite pleasing to the ear. Many thanks Emmajoy.

Lathen

[Kim S.]

Very clever and so creative, enjoyed this a lot

[Lathen Griffiths]

Thank you Beckies.

Lathen

[Dee’s Poem]

Took me a moment to catch it. But it was more fun reading it once I did. Lovely poem

[Lathen Griffiths]

Thank you Dee,
Thank you Dee, ;)

Lathen