Three Little Words

Three Little Words

A Poem by Lathen Griffiths

What’s hidden yet within plain view?
Perhaps it is my love for you,
perhaps it is me not knowing
the love I feel my eyes are showing
or how at times my faltered speech
lingers soft within your reach
hoping you become aware
of the love that’s waiting there,
yet if you don’t to my dismay
perhaps I’ll have to simply say
and hope that you don’t misconstrue
three little words that end with you.

© 2023 Lathen Griffiths


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A good title Lathe. You managed greatly to rhyme the words and at the same time keep the romantic process in your poem. Enjoyed reading this poem.
Good Luck

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, poetic and amazing, like the feel of this write

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Lathen Griffiths

2 Years Ago

Thank you Beckie, I enjoy writing romantic poetry but I think in part because it’s not the norm fo.. read more
I was taught that actions speak louder than words. And yet, those words, so cliched, still seem to need to be spoken daily. Words from the heart well written.

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lathen Griffiths

2 Years Ago

I agree with you, perhaps it’s the ears that hear those three little words that validate there mea.. read more
M. J. Smith

2 Years Ago

You're so very welcome, Sir.
Implication is a great tool. I like how you use it in this poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lathen Griffiths

2 Years Ago

Thank you Soren.
Short but very beautiful. It just shows how you can say a lot in few words. I love this piece.
- Jei

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lathen Griffiths

2 Years Ago

Thank you Jei.
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Gee
Ckever, well written rhyming poetry that trips off the tongue.
Good morning

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lathen Griffiths

2 Years Ago

Thank you Gee, good morning
simply wonderful and amazing, this is lovely

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lathen Griffiths

2 Years Ago

Thank you.
Simply gorgeous poetry. Really nicely conveyed romance. Have a good weekend Lathe.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lathen Griffiths

2 Years Ago

Thank you Chris, I hope you have a wonderful weekend.

Lathe

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Lathen Griffiths
Lathen Griffiths

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