letters

pour your heart into me this time

let's explore what we havent

and not care about what people think

or care

or see.

 

i wish that you had turned around

and followed me back

demanding that we say

"screw the world. let's do this thing."

 

the next time i see you,

i dont think i could handle if you dont.

i'll race against the world

just to get to you

 

because i think you'd take my breath away

no.

i know you'd take my breath away.

Reviews

[BLFK]

With the photograph and words, I found this is be uniquely beautiful. Your wording was really great. The title is good for it. I especially loved,
"because i think you'd take my breath away

no.

i know you'd take my breath away."

Very good job.

BLFK