for you to say it too

for you to say it too

A Poem by Last Minute Lani

i'm thinkin of you right now

as the rain falls from the sky

i wish that you were here to take my hand

and run into the night

 

with all i am

i'm writing you this song

and all i know

is i wanna be with you

 

i'm thinkin of you right now

the way your smile lights up the world

i wanna be the one that you can hold forever

and be that fire in your eyes

 

with all i am

i'm writing you this song

and all i know

is i wanna be with you

 

all i want

is for you to say it too

 

© 2008 Last Minute Lani


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i love it... :)
once you fall in love the one and only thing you want to hear are those special words.


Posted 16 Years Ago


well i just told you what i thought about this poem but i'll say it again hehe! i love the mystery that you have in the end of the poem:

"and all i know
is i wanna be with you

all i want
is for you to say it too"

very straight forward yet sweet. well done:)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Last Minute Lani
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hey. i'm Lani, 17. singer, songwriter, musician i've always loved to write and i love to talk. so i guess you can say my writing comes out alot like how i talk. enjoy more..

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