Light of Love

Whispers dance on the willows.

Dreams may come true.

In my bed visions dance

Running hot and red

Through my head

Roses opening bloom

Reaching for the moon.

Lusty visions enchant my soul

Sweating hard and hot

Milky pearls of Eros

Glisten on your skin.

Roses sparkling red and sweating diamonds

Passionately entwined in bed

Virtues blend in sweaty pearls,

On a bed poised velvety red.

Your petals pink mirrored inside,

Virtues loosed on my bow

Plunging your

Petals of pink,

Buried deep

Softly in the fold.

My soul quakes

With thoughts of you

Floating in my head

Lost to a vision

Of passionate bliss.

Unto this day I pay ode

The bulb that becomes the flower.

My love rests an illuminated glow

Reviews

[Erotic Goddess]

In my bed visions dance
Running hot and red
Through my head
Roses opening bloom
Reaching for the moon.
Lusty visions enchant my soul

Wow!! Packs quite a punch with this piece, and I love the way you describe things so wonderful and so poetic. I really enjoyed this piece. I am glad that I got a chance to check this out. You are a wonderful writer.

~Goddess

[MoriartyMesa]

Always know you touched the golden goddess.


Nice Job

[C.R. Moore "Lasla"]

Thank you ! Blessings!

[melissa]

Sensual. i like it :)

[Amanda]

what a wonderfully written expression of love...passionate, flowing and quite descriptive. just loved it!

beautiful write, Lasla :)

Amanda

ps...sorry i hadn't gotten to it earlier, i really miss out on the full impact...

[Kimberly Smith]

awwwwww loved this

[BABSIE BEE]

Totally speachless Lasla. 10 out of 10. Thanks soooooooooooo much.
Babsie Bee xx

[deeps]

Sensual write here, I like it, it's very beautiful, i can feel the passion of love behind it.

[Tiana]

Beautiful, passionate and sensual poem, Lasla ... Wonderfully written!

[Ladysue]

passionate bliss indeed! Your word choices were just so that made this a very romantic write!

[Shelby Baker]

Nicely wrote nice words and how u placed them togther and such. All around nice.