Thoughts of You

If you were here I wouldn’t cry blue

Or tarry in the mire.

I would dream with you,

In surrealism tried and true

Laced in blue.

I send a kiss to you thru the stars

I send my love for you in a carriage of

Diamonds trimmed in blue.

If only you will believe in dreams

And how they come true.

In my heart’s desire I prepare

My love for you

In a halo of stars twinkling

Electric blue.

Ocean swells inside my head

As I wait for you.

My nature standing true

Cloaked in blue with thoughts of you.

Lasla Moore copyright 2007

Reviews

[BABSIE BEE]

Fabulous write. Soooooo very refreshing to read that it touches my soul. Thank you for sharing.
Babsie Bee xx

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

Bravo my friend, this is genius!
The way it slowly blossoms, unravels gracefully then delivers a sincere and potent ending.
I would put my favorite lines but the entire poem would be in this box! lol
You are a great poet/storyteller and the momentum, colors, temperatures and sounds of your work are consistently avant-garde. I admire your work because your metaphors are truly the reflection of a gifted artistic mind and not one that simply mimics but you create beautiful realms for us as readers to frequent and receive insight.
Keep up the brilliant work my friend!

-Marvin

[Erotic Goddess]

I send a kiss to you thru the stars
I send my love for you in a carriage of
Diamonds trimmed in blue.
If only you will believe in dreams
And how they come true.

Stunning, and the mood that you create, simply perfect, and your words are just superb. You are a wonderful writer and the romanticism in this piece is just perfect.

xxoxx
Goddess