Lovers Void!!!

sorrow of lost Love!

Rain falling upon my soul

 

Drowning my senses

 

I say your name

 

Reaching for you

 

No one is there

 

Hurling me into a lover’s void

 

 

Searching for your love

 

Sending a cosmic plea

 

For you to love and to return to me

 

Rescue me from this lover’s void

 

Bring your love to me

 

 

Rain stings my face

 

I awaken from a dream to a new day

 

Finding your love close

 

Returned to me

 

Within me

 

Releasing me from the void in my soul

 

 

 

Lasla

Reviews

[TamiViolet]

Silky smooth and embracing, Lasla as you capture the emptiness left upon the soul when a love is lost.

Rain stings my face
I awaken from a dream to a new day

Excellent imagery relative to transference from dream to reality. Or was it a dream? I enjoy how you allow the reader to make that determination...

High emotional appeal in this read, my friend.

[BABSIE BEE]

Emotional, warm and passionate with strength. This is a lovely write with great imagery with an end result. Thanks for sharing. I like your work and am intending reading a lot more of it.

Babsie Bee xxx

[Jane Doe]

Beautiful! Wonderfully descriptive and very emotional. I love the use of the words "lover's void." A delightful poem.

[Léo Duval]

It's incredible - when I read your words, music by Nightwish and Epica came to my ears! It seems your poem could be perfect as one of those bands' songs! ;)

[*** Hey Jude***]

This comes from deep within the soul as shown by the expression of emotion. I also though it flowed really well, nice work! ~ Jude :-)

[Kizitaly]

It is a beautiful poem.

[Amanda]

a nice, sad write of love lost...we have all been there. some things are meant to be, some are not....it may hurt deep down, but to go on with without that love is what is important.

Always,

Amanda